AT THE BRINK OF SPRING

BRINK OF SPRING

Can you feel it?
Spring's awakening, inhaling deep,
stretching her arms, getting the kinks out.
She breathes heat into the morning sun
so a line of snowflakes atop the maple's branches
shimmers into liquid
then drips down, tapping pockmarks
into the rounded snowdrifts slumped against the fence.

Hello there!

It’s feeling very much like we’re about to transform from winter to spring here. There’s warmth in the sun. The remaining snow (we had about two feet on the ground until yesterday’s rain) is more crystal than powder. And the birds are back!

Are you noticing any hints of seasonal change in your backyard? You might have to look closely. I think all transformation begins this way: subtle hints that gradually gain momentum to the point where something turns over, or steps forward, or begins.

Personally, I’m still fully ensconced in winter’s energy: still spending most of my days indoors, partly because of all the writing I’m doing, partly because I got into that habit while rehabbing a broken bone in my foot (don’t worry – it’s much better!)

How about you? Are you eager for spring’s energizing warmth and colour? Or still luxuriating within winter’s blanket?

Spring is always so energizing for me! It’s my favourite season and this year it has me thinking about transformations.

What new facets might emerge when you step forward into the new season?

Lee Ann

EXERCISES FOR POETS

It might surprise you to know what exercises poets use to hone their craft. Just like other types of artists – musicians, dancers, singers, painters – serious poets work hard practicing the fundamentals of their art. So when they sit down to create, they have the technical skills to make clear, strong, evocative poems.

So what are the poetic equivalents of say, practicing pentatonic scales on piano or guitar, a singer’s breathing exercises, a ballerina’s workouts at the barre?

A Poet’s Reference Shelves

A poet’s apparatus is not a musical instrument or a physical body; it’s language. So a poet needs consistent, close study of language, and that means reading a lot of poetry, finding a beacon to reach towards. Two of my beacons are Lorna Crozier and Kim Addonizio, poets whose work is easy to read yet complex at the same time.

More than study, it helps to have a fascination with language. After all, there’s not a lot of room in a poem to develop an idea, tell a story, evoke an emotional reaction. Each word must be carefully selected, must be precise. A poet’s reference material is not sheet music but a thesaurus.

In addition, a serious poet does exercises to explore and perfect the elements of style and structure. Here’s an example of an exercise I recently completed, from poet Dorianne Laux’s workbook, Finger Exercises for Poets. The focus here is on syllables and lines, and the challenge is to:

  • write a simple eight-line poem in couplets (two-line stanzas)
  • use one-and two-syllable words
  • use one three- or four-syllable word
  • work with the idea of twos.

(If you think this sounds like TOO FUN TO BE LEGAL, you may be a poet!) Here’s what I came up with:

Twin maple trees in winter
stand close as this popsicle

just pulled apart.
My daughter's eyes

round and keen
await like the tree branches

keenly await spring sun.
Soon: two types of sticky sugar treats.

This little poem illustrates another aspect of good technique, best explained by Pulitzer Prize-winning poet Stephen Dunn, who said that the fact that something happened is the worst reason to put it in a poem. A poet, he said, must be a maker instead of an utterer. In other words, a poet may use something that happened as a springboard into a poem, but rarely is it justifiable to keep something in a poem just because it happened. When a poet makes something out of that actual event… well, that’s a better poem. And sometimes it’s completely made up, as this one is, and as those of you who know me will have suspected, the first clue being I do not have a daughter!

Now you know! Poets work like any other artist to master the fundamentals of their art: through practice and study they develop the technical skills that allow them to give readers a sense of enjoyment and maybe even expansion. That is the goal of any art, yes? As I wrote in a recent poem,

… you write all this down hoping just one reader

finds themselves saying, “huh”

which is universal-speak for when a human pauses and realizes something new.

Lee Ann

WINTER MORNING

I wanted to check in this morning, after the first of Ottawa’s “impactful” snowfall days, because I’ve been thinking about the winter season and noticing some things.

Winter Light

Like light. Have you ever noticed how the quality of winter light is softer somehow, than summer or autumn light? It seems, especially on an overcast day, to be somewhat diffused, as through it beams through some sort of fine gauze. Also, there’s a stillness to winter that I think is unique to this season. Have you noticed this?

It is, of course, the season of hibernation. Of pulling back, of pulling in, of rest. At least it is in Nature, and I’ve been thinking that I want some of that for myself this season. Less doing, more open space. Less multi-tasking, more one-thing-at-a-time. I’ve come up with one or maybe two Winter Projects: activities that are suited to this season of replenishing. One thing I plan to do is write a new poem every week. Here’s one:

What have you been planning to do with your wintertime? I hope your winter season is one where you notice things that replenish you!

Lee Ann

What Else is New?

My series, “Fascinating Women You’ve Never Heard Of” continues! For you last-minute shoppers, how about introducing someone on your list to a new historical novel featuring a real and fascinating woman? I recently interviewed two authors of such books and I recommend both. Check with your local independent bookstore for:

What They Said About Luisa, by Erika Rummel. In 1575, Luisa Abrego, a freed slave from Seville, was tried in Mexico for bigamy by officers of the Spanish Inquisition. Aside from the trial record, no other documentation of her exists. Intrigued by that scrap of information, Renaissance historian and author Erika Rummel resurrects Luisa in her latest novel. My interview with Rummel is here.

A Pair of Wings, by Carole Hopson. Bessie Coleman was the first American to earn a civilian aviation certificate from the French Federation Aeronautique Internacionale (FAI). This was something she had to do because, being African American and female in the 1920s, nobody in the United States would train her to fly. My interview with Hopson is here.

FINDING BEAUTY IN UNLIKELY PLACES

It’s June and life is in full bloom! Take your morning coffee outside and have a look for yourself, in your own yard or next door. I’ve always said June is the best month in the garden, because nothing has gone wrong yet. No bug infestations, no drought, no wash-out rains. Plants are bursting with new leaves and colours of every hue, expanding daily, it seems, to fill in all the rough spots. Here are some samples from my own back yard:

Of course, June makes it easy to find beauty. It’s everywhere – but what if it’s not?

I recently found myself in a setting and a situation that was anything but beautiful. And as I looked around, I thought: here I am, the one who says she’s on a mission to find beauty in everyday life, and to put more beauty into the world, but not every day is a day in June. So I set myself a challenge: to find and write about something beautiful in that not-so-beautiful experience.

I can tell you it took a few days to sift through the details and to finally see something good, something I could call beautiful. But I did find it:

SIGNS OF HEALING IN THE EMERGENCY WAITING ROOM

The white-haired woman hobbles in
leaning heavily on her husband’s arm.
She drops into the chair in Triage
where a nurse points to a poster of cartoon faces
to help her describe her pain on a scale of 1 to 10.
She stares for a moment at her left foot
her face scrunched into Level 8 pain,
limps to a waiting room chair and waits to be called.

Opposite her, under a sign explaining that
abusive language will not be tolerated
sits a boy about 8,
a gauze bandage encircling his head,
green stains on the knees of his baseball uniform
red stain on the gauze.
While mom hovers, standing because of a chair shortage,
dad explains in precise, descriptive language
how medical staples differ from the ones the boy knows from school.
The boy is briefly distracted.
The white-haired woman learns something new.

Next to the boy, below a large photo of a pretty nurse
holding a banner that reports 35% of nurses experience abuse in the workplace,
a 30-something man sits in a wheelchair with his right leg outstretched
icepack balanced on his ankle.
He is joined by a pretty 30-something woman who hands him a large coffee.
Their eyes lock for a moment, crinkle at the corners in matching smiles.
She adjusts the icepack.
The white-haired woman leans gratefully against her husband.

Across the room, the sliding glass doors
whoosh open to a tall woman cradling her right elbow, fist clenched against her waist.
A large sign pasted on the doors warns in bold black typeface,
do not open these doors between 11:30p.m. and 6a.m.
to anyone except our staff or patients.
A rumpled man in a worn shirt and blue medical mask stands
to give the tall woman his seat.
She unclenches her fist, presses her palm to her heart.
The white-haired woman stops shivering.

You may already be the type of person who gives up your seat, adjusts the icepack, gives a smile when that’s all you have to give. I apparently need to challenge myself in that regard. So I’ve set a goal to remind myself the next time I’m a situation that’s far from a day in June, I’m going to be the one who adds some beauty!

Lee Ann

What Else is New?

Do you ever wonder:

  1. What’s really going on in the life of a plant? Check out my article, “Under the Microscope: The Wonder and Mystery of Plants” on Page 5 of the March issue of “Trowel Talk,” the newsletter of the Master Gardeners of Ottawa Carleton.
  2. What’s happening under the surface of the soil where your garden grows? “Soil: It’s Not Dirt!” in the June issue of Trowel Talk reveals all!

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IT’S NATIONAL POETRY MONTH! Something for everyone – yes, you too!

I hear you celebrating out there – try to keep it down, OK, poets are busy writing!

The Academy of American Poets started National Poetry Month in 1996. You might not know that it has grown to be one of the largest literary celebrations in the world. Readers, students, K–12 teachers, librarians, booksellers, literary events curators, publishers, bloggers, and—of course—poets take part in a variety of activities and events in order to recognize and promote the value of poetry. Many poets – me included – challenge themselves to write a poem a day during the month of April.

The League of Canadian Poets launched National Poetry Month in Canada in 1998. The League defines a theme every year, inspiring poets and poetry lovers alike. This year, it’s WEATHER.

Well, there’s a theme that never stops inspiring Canadians…!

Mother Nature got right into the spirit of things last week, blowing up a huge storm across Ontario and Quebec that dumped about 15cm of wet snow on top of all the spring greenery that had started to poke up in my garden. It all melted 24 hours later, but meantime, my poetry prompt of the day was metaphor and I certainly found myself inspired!

While you may not be inclined to scribble some poetic lines of your own (and why not??) there are plenty of ways to get into the world of poetry this month. Read some Dr. Seuss or Shel Silverstein to your kids or grandkids. Sing in the shower or the car and marvel at the lyrics behind the music. Take a poet to lunch! (Just kidding… sort of…)

Meanwhile, I hope you enjoy “Snowsuit.”

Lee Ann

What Else is New?

Now that Nature has had her last hurrah, you’re probably as keen as I am to get out to the garden. Just in time, the Master Gardeners of Ottawa-Carleton have launched their popular garden lecture series. Each hour-long Zoom session is delivered by an enthusiastic and knowledgeable Master Gardener. You don’t have to live in Ottawa to benefit from these informative and fun sessions, offered in partnership with Friends of the Central Experimental Farm (FCEF). Bonus poetry prompt: write a verse about your favourite weed or bug.

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NOW THAT’S A POEM: Where Inspiration Comes From

Have you ever wanted to ask an artist, “Where do you get your ideas?” I’m here to help! As many of you know, I’m endlessly fascinated by the creative process and have written quite a bit about it here on the site. Turns out, inspiration is lurking in many surprising places.

Local Beauty

For me, inspiration often lies in the beauty I’ve photographed in my everyday world. Here are some examples of photos I’m currently writing from:

How do I decide which of my hundreds of photos inspire me? When I look at one and think, “now that’s a poem!” Then I’ll start to jot down thoughts about what’s in the picture, what ideas it sparks, what feelings it invokes. The photo is a jumping off point. The resulting poem is rarely a description of what’s in the scene.

Themes and Structures

Another trigger can come from a “call for submission”, where a journal or website announces they are looking for writers to send in new work. Often these calls are for a certain theme to be written about, or certain style of poem to be created. For example, Frontier Poetry recently requested submissions for their “Not in Love Tanka Challenge.” Oh yeah, this is inspiring: to try to stuff such a huge theme into the five-line/31 syllable structure that is the Tanka poem!

I can’t show you that one, as I did submit and can’t publish anywhere else, including here, before hearing back from Frontier Poetry. However, I can show you “White Quill Pen”. This poem was one of three I submitted, answering a call by the League of Canadian Poets. It was selected for Fresh Voices #30. This scene, taken in Canmore, Alberta, inspired the poem. You can see the poem with its photo in my Photo Art Gallery.

Magical Thinking

And yes, sometimes it’s all very “woo-woo” and I’ll wake up with some lines that seem to insist on being written. Recently I got: “Meegwich/thank you, I hope my people were kind.” This led to a poem that is a type of land acknowledgement to the native people of the Niagara Region. My ancestors were some of the very first white settlers there, and the poem includes details from my years of genealogical research.

Your Turn!

So there you go! I hope I’ve answered your question about where inspiration comes from, at least partly. Follow-up questions are most welcome!

Meanwhile, even if you’re not a practicing artist, why not challenge yourself to notice what ignites some excitement, some curiosity, or maybe even an “ah-ha!” moment? You may be surprised by where inspiration comes from. Who knows what may galvanize you… and what that might lead to!

Lee Ann

What Else is New?

Looking for gardening inspiration? Find Seedy Saturday events across Canada in February and March. Shop for low-priced seeds from local sources, talk to local vendors, attend fun and informative workshops. For my Ottawa readers: Look for the Master Gardeners of Ottawa-Carleton’s advice table at the Ottawa event, March 2, 691 Smyth Road, and at the Carp event, March 9, 3790 Carp Road.